Amazing PC Game

Amazing PC Game

2A Emily

In the holiday, the boy, Billy was listening to the MP3 player and playing the PC game at home. The name of the game is Zelma’s Quest. It was extremely exciting.

In the game, the goddess Zelma needed to kill the bad monster. But her energy was limited. Suddenly the goddess Zelma jumped out from the computer.

And then, she grabbed Billy’s gaming console, multimedia player as well as high-tech gadgets. Billy wanted to switch off the computer but the computer was out of control, it couldn’t be switched off.

Goddess Zelma took the high-tech gadgets and then jumped back into the computer. The monster felt puzzled and Billy felt afraid.

The goddess felt curious because high-tech gadgets were in advance. The goddess Zelma shared the MP3 player with the bad monster. Then, Zelma played the notebook computer. Also, she used the digital camera to take a photo.

Finally, they became friends.

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21 Responses to Amazing PC Game

  1. Owen 說道:

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  4. 說道:

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  6. 正正 說道:

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  9. Daniel 說道:

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  13. 說道:

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  15. Unknown 說道:

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  17. K威 說道:

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  21. hoi ying 說道:

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